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Victim of the Modern AgeAre you a victim of the modern age Did they spoon-feed your brain with drivel Was your upbringing such a shame Was it so uncivil Victim of the Modern Age
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mphshe throttles and swerves, doing seventy-four on a five lane freeway, radio blasting singing babe I'm gonna leave you.
he's kicking up dust that drifts across the offramp, singing can't find my way home. scuffs the ground because proper people pick up their feet.
now the highway's open like legs, and hers tremble as she pushes the pedal to the floor.
he turns his head, and barely a smile when her car skids into the restraining wall of Interstate 71. mph
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~theledtool Sep 13, 2003, 4:49:21 PM

Be weary of people who call themselves an "emotional poet." Their work is usually neither potent nor provoking nor interesting, and if you try to tell them this, they get all ... emotional ... about the whole thing.

:LOL:

~vipassana Sep 16, 2003, 2:12:30 PM

blah no. I was far too emotional/bitchy.

Whoops

~theledtool Sep 16, 2003, 3:09:53 PM

No one should really get very defensive about critiques though. Criticism is generally more useful/practical than praise, and for that reason, it should be encouraged. Taking comments too seriously, whether or not the comments are good/bad, is against the progress of an artist inevitably.

*Shrugs* And mainly I wanted to take a crack at how artistically void the so-called "emotional poetry" is.

~vipassana Sep 17, 2003, 12:25:42 AM

"*Shrugs* And mainly I wanted to take a crack at how artistically void the so-called "emotional poetry" is. "

I'll let you off in that case then

~theledtool Sep 17, 2003, 2:37:13 PM

You're very kind.

~shadowassassin Aug 24, 2003, 1:20:57 PM

It was certainly entertaining to read your long comments and debate with ` rebelchic on my poem "mph". It's awesome to see people actually thinking about poetry and scanning it for meaning, as it was intended

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Thank you very much for putting that warm and fuzzy feeling inside of me